Eni @ Cham

Pradeep Miriyala
1 min readMar 12, 2021

The Valley of Lost Souls

“Eni” is the darkest valley on a mysterious planet named “Cham”. It is the darkest valley for two reasons, both physical and spiritual.

The planet “Cham” is part of the star Nia’s planetary system. The star has been powerful for many eras.

But, it all changed when life formed on the planet Cham. At first, it seemed like Cham is completely in control of Nia. The more life prospered on Cham, the more diverse it became, it grew richer.

The planet is at Utopian state until one day that changed the course of Nia and the rest of the universe.

An asteroid roaming around Nia, suddenly changed its course and fallen down on Cham. This fallen asteroid made the deepest valley “Eni” on Cham.

This valley soon became home to attract all darkness of the Cham.

No light of Nia can escape it
No soul of Cham can escape it
No light of Nia can exit it
No soul of Cham can cross it
Is it a black hole or just a valley of unspeakable things?

The valley started eating all energy from Nia. All the other planets in Nia’s system have started falling into darkness. Nia has been never weaker than it is now.

What will be the fate of Nia, when Cham becomes a star of its own? Is there a soul that can save Nia from Eni?

(Now re-read by replacing “Nia” with “Brain”, “Eni-Cham” with “Machine”)

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Pradeep Miriyala

Engineer by profession, Programmer by interest, Poet/Writer by hobby. Poetry blog: http://pradeepblog.miriyala.in